Also been loving the direction you're going so far. And as a Rider fiend, I have some idea for my fox blorbo here. Just make it like a canon event where everyone (except Bullet Time) just think Ace's just some rando snob that's fight good and wanting to exploit him, particularly villainous fellow like Flowey or Springtrap. All while he actually caught up with everyone's scheme and maybe going full trickster on them (e.g. Slendy's hubris going of the roof thinking no one understood what he said only for Ace to understand it perfectly and/or maybe talk to it in it's own tongue). Have him alluding to his longevity when talking to Frieren, or calling Pacman "doctor" AKA Ex-Aid Crossover film (yeah, the canon is kinda flaccid for this one). Also have him secretly rewrite some rule of the game like he does in the series, like subtlely a rule or two before gaslighting Ringmaster into believing it. And one more flaccid canon, have him use his creation power to spawn EVERY EXISTING RIDER BELT and scatter it throughout the island for a day as a prank, and any schmuck who put the belt on were compelled to strike a henshin pose, leading to interaction between the contestant and the belt like how the belt stayed on Henry despite his pencil-thin waist, Springtrap griping how he got shoved into a suit again and its abysmal visibility (he got a real life Faiz suit with hot neon light and glow up mask, zero eyehole), or overall chaos unfold from them going hogwild with their Rider power. At the end of the day, the belt disappeared and no one know where'd it come from, except Sakuya
Speaking of Sakuya, I see her relationship with Ace as a Tsundere way, as in she may have soften up to him a bit, but kept a distance and be kinda mean to him out of her loyalty to her mistress or something like that. All while she tried to lay low, being a simple capable maid below everybody's radar only for Bullet Time to drag her into the limelight. (all while lamenting why Remilia decided to sent her here)
Also another thing for Ace, let him interact with all the space-time manipulator in the island (Henry, Flowey, Slendy, what have you) like watching their shenanigan unfold, unaffected.
Sorry for the wall of text, I'm kinda over the moon that Kamen Rider is finally getting an episode.
Ok, first off, sorry for the confusion, by bonus chapter, I meant the one that is up coming that is really a full chapter. Anyways I like a lot of the ideas you suggested for Geats. I love getting wordy comments, even if they are bit read at times
As for your ideas. I unfortunately doubt I can do the other exploiting Geats thing you mentioned, but i can definitely include moments of him understanding what Slendy is saying, and hinting stuff to Frieren. Also that idea of him changing the rules slightly is really good, I think I can pull something like that off really soon!
And with that belt idea. I doubt I can make that a random prank Geats pulls, that could be a fun future challenge, a free for all with everyone in different Kamen rider suits, with potentially unique ones matching their own character and boosting their powers in ways. What do you think of that?
And lastly I will definitely have him be interacting and sort of messing with other time manipulators as suggested.
Overall? That'd be grand (victory) #arujaaanaito.mp4
Next, yeah I'd just notice some plothole in my idea right there, of course if every one start henshinning, they're gonna doubt the henshin guy first, unless, in Slendy's word, “IF XBT WFSZ PCWJPVT CVU FWFSZPOF FMTF JT B EVNCBTT”. Anyway I already have some idea for what kind of belt the islanders would use:
Demons Driver for Constantine (Or any belt from Revice consider his whole deal about devil dealing) or Spider-Man (literally spider suit, Peter's gonna be sooo confused no matter who use it)
Frieren get Eternal Gaia Memory because some guy on Xitter (@Saikekuu) draw her using one.
Miku get DoReMiFa Beat Gashat (Rhythm Game)
Pac-Man using Pac Adventure Gashat (Literally Pac-Man Gashat)
Willy A. get either Dangerous Zombie Gashat or Gold Drive (a fellow death-cheating, abusive dad) or just IRL suit with no power and pathetic excuse of an eyehole (you see how Rider's mask have some black spot around their eye? That's actually an eyehole for suit actor and the visibility in there is as bad as it look. Seiji Takaiwa went through a lot man). That rotten SOAB traumatize me as a kid, I want him to suffer.
There's also this guy on reddit drawing fanart of the participant using rider belt to give you some idea. (https://www.reddit.com/user/Sufficient_Sun999/submitted/)
But yeah, I digress I wanna see some outfoxing action happening at some point.
(EDIT: Some more idea: DGP crew somehow got their hands on the island's signal so Ziin and Tsumuri invite main three for a watch-along, could make for an interesting POV and reaction.
Also love your interpretation of Steve, of course he'll be hyper self-sufficient when he need to do everything himself.
And ending on Henry's line? just *chef kiss* ominous and foreshadowy, really get me eager for more, now I wonder who he think is a "threat".)
I really do like driver ideas and stuff, I'm definitely going to make that a future challenge and chapter. Just don't expect it for a while, since it will be complicated to research, as I still lack a lot of knowledge about Kamen Rider (I am going to watch more of Geats' show soon, though). For the watch party idea, I'm on the fence about it. I don't want the fic to get too messy with other characters from contestants reacting to the show events. I might do it in the future, but I might not as well.
I'm glad you enjoyed how I made Steve's character. I was proud of how I wrote him. And that hook with Henry is going to be a pretty big plotline in this fic. It will also involve Geats in some way, not saying he is the threat exactly, but more like a piece to the larger puzzle.
Understandable. Don't let them idea bogged you down from actually writing out the thing.
Aaand sorry for bringing up the belt again but one more thing, let's put some DX and CSM toy in the bunch too. They'd look, feel, even light up and sound like a real one but useless in combat. And on Springtrap getting IRL light-up costume, let the springlock act up and crush the battery pack and burst into flame so hard he became Burntrap, whatdayamakeofthat?
Which moment did you dig again? the toy belt or Springtrap getting his Lithium battery creased?
Also some clarification: CSM stand for Complete Selection Modification, since Chainsaw Man tend to come in the search result unless I add "belt" or "Bandai" to the keyword.
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