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  1. Oh… "I would worship at your fucking alter, and I'd burn it all down for you. I will make you forget about all the shit that hurts."
    Those words should be Steve's. I think Jay is a real psychopath who targeted Dustin because he saw him as vulnerable. Even though he started out acting kind and considerate, it seems he doesn't care about Dustin enough. And we never found out what happened when Dustin cut himself in Eddie's trailer, or was that just a dream?
    Didn't anyone see the injuries or anything about that?

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    1. He did cut himself in Eddie's trailer, he does things like that when he's alone - so nobody knows.

      And yes, Jay is dangerous - but then... *whispers* you'll find out LOL <3

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    2. Exactly! And sometimes and some persons don't need the whole world to be burn, so hopefully Steve come up with something like "I might not burn the whole world for you, but I'll make YOUR world worth living " or something like that, because I just don't trust this Jay guy, he's isolating Dustin even more and making Dustin dependable of him. Shootout to the writer for making such a so well written character, but I'm starting to hate this character. When you love someone you make him do better, no worse! And yes, hopefully someone notices Dustin self-harming.

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      1. I'm glad you like my creation but hate him too LOL >:)

        I'm happy you are enjoying the story so far? You may change your mind again as you keep reading <3

        It's got a long way to go ;)

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        1. Enjoying it? I’m savoring it. Hungry for more. Thank you for your great work. Although I’m a little afraid you might be using reverse psychology with the “you may change your mind,” as if that makes Jay a good guy or maybe he’s actually a bad guy and you want me to think he’s a good guy, hence that line. Lol. Either way, and as you say, I still have a long way to go, but so far it’s amazing!!!

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          1. Aww savoring it! That is truly a beautiful word. Savoring. 😈

            I am so happy you are savoring it love, that means so much to me.

            ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

             

            *giggles* I will give nothing at all away!! I love your comments the give me so much!

            I am still writing more of this 😆

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