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  1. A lawyer doesn't cry until it is all over. Or, in this case, the chief Prosecutor (or the Attorney General). I like your portrayal of Lana in a time of corruption, a time where she tries to hide her feelings. She lost Mia just like she lost her warmth, and she did not realise how much she needed it until then.

    She has more bad luck than even Maggey Byrde. She was forced to choose that path, and Mia's death was just the beginning of Lana paying the price.

    Good fanfic. Keep it up.

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    1. thank you for your comment! I've always imagined that losing Mia was the last straw for Lana, and after that she gave in to the corruption fully. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic!

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      1. You're welcome.

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