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  1. Jimmopolis on Chapter 2 Fri 27 Jan 2023 09:51AM UTC

    I have no problem with evil Sakura nor with evil Sasuke (they're pretty awful already in the canonical story), but will they die in the future? Honestly if they will be Naruto's enemies and there will be no friendship or what will be at the end of the canonical shippuden they better die soon. I mean keeping them alive until the 4th shinobi war and possibly having them as enemies and Sasuke with Indra's side of the powers is a problem. I know he could proceed like the canon story (sort of) and keep them alive, but is there any benefit to them being evil traitors more than canon Sasuke? If there is no way to redeem them, they better die soon. Gaara could kill them or something else.

    Another question I want to ask is will there be only Haku and Hinata with Naruto in this story? You don't necessarily need other girls for Naruto, but to have them the cra should be active and more than two girls are needed. Also Sasuke might force other girls for him and Naruto would have to save them (if Sasuke doesn't die). I am referring above all to Ino and Temari who would be in danger in this situation. Ino after the second exam in the forest may be terrified of Sasuke and Sakura is now crazy. I know another of your stories also have Ino and Temari, but they are the best for a harem. You could add or replace one of them with Tenten, but she matters less because she's not a clan member. The only other major addition may be Karin.

    If your intention is to let only Hinata and Haku remain I will accept it without problems, but keep in mind that an evil Sasuke would force Haku to belong to him and Naruto to protect her and Hinata must enter the cra and two alone are not enough.

    Many stories also have adult women in the harem, but it's not always pleasant because Naruto is too young. One that would fit well is Anko in stories where Naruto manages to remove Orochimaru's curse mark and it should be added that she and Naruto have similar stories.

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    1. I_A_S_Production_06 on Chapter 2 Fri 27 Jan 2023 04:36PM UTC

      I wasn't planning on a harem but add it after I could not find any one put Haku with. There is another girl like this but wasn't sure it would work because she's from Iwa. Even though I love Temari I didn't think it would work with the story. Ino would end up with Sai even though I don't like Sai.

      If want me to add a girl there is only one who doesn't have a partner that's the one from Iwa.

      Side note: Should I add Anko in Konoha's Spiraling Ice Dragon harem? I've been thinking about it.

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      1. Jimmopolis on Chapter 2 Fri 27 Jan 2023 07:37PM UTC

        Anko could be in that story, but without an important piece created for her, she wouldn't do well in the harem. Perhaps you could add her in a similar way to an older sister rather than one of Naruto's girlfriends. Anko is an interesting character and can work even if she's not in the harem, but she's still an important character. Also there are already four girls there which is more than enough.

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        1. I_A_S_Production_06 on Chapter 2 Fri 27 Jan 2023 08:56PM UTC

          I agree, I'll do that. I said four was enough but I wanted to get someone else's opinion before doing anything drastic. Thanks, because she's going to be in next chapter of Konoha's Spiraling Ice Dragon. I just wanted to know were to place her role in the story.

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