Comment on Chie and Makoto: Inaba's Buddy Cops

1. godlessAdversary on Chapter 1 Mon 27 Feb 2023 06:59AM UTC

   

   I haven't even seen Lethal Weapon and after reading bits of Wikipedia I can asure you Chie isn't suicidal.

   I use the script format to avoid constantly refering to the people talking with sentences like "said this character". It can also help to give a mystery if a character starts with the name "???".

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2. 1. SheepPF on Chapter 1 Mon 27 Feb 2023 02:43PM UTC

      

      I'm quite sure that I was aware that Chie isn't suicidal, too, along with the fact that I didn't bring it up. I just thought it reminded me of the scene where Riggs wakes up, and that's it.

      On the other hand, I think it also works as quite a pretty good screenplay

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   2. 1. godlessAdversary on Chapter 1 Mon 27 Feb 2023 11:16PM UTC

         

         Thanks.

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