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  1. Elemental_Mage on Chapter 1 Wed 08 Mar 2023 10:12AM UTC

    Elemental Mage

    Hiya, I’ll reply to all of your messages in this thread.

    The only fandoms I will write for are pretty much any F/F pairing in the Harry Potter ‘verse. Mirandy from the Devil Wears Prada and SwanQueen from Once Upon a Time. I don’t feel like I know any other fandoms well enough to write for them. Perhaps SuperCat? And I possible want to try Ocean’s 8 at some point 🤷♀️

    Cute idea ref the baby, but I don’t think it’s right for this fic. Maybe in a sequel or a different fic!

    Sorry, I don’t use social media at all.

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    1. Cissy_s_Mione_24_2 on Chapter 1 Wed 08 Mar 2023 11:23AM UTC

      Ok. Would be HP, Pairing G!P Narcissa and a Feisty Feminine Womanly Hermione

      Perhaps Narcissa being Twins or Triplets, Not Married, Lucius being Married to perhaps one of Narcissa's Cousins, The Background being a AU of DH and After, The Narcissa Triplets perhaps being more Powerful than Bellatrix, and rescue Hermione when She was being questioned by Bella, the Narcissa Triplets Darkly Torture Bella to point where Bella becomes irreparably Broken and disabled, Whisking Hermione away, to heal her, but that they are deeply in love with Her, and wish to have Hermione as their Wife, but have Darkness within them, Hermione having Belle-Like Tenderness, while they are like Beast-Like behavior

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    2. Cissy_s_Mione_24_2 on Chapter 1 Wed 08 Mar 2023 11:34AM UTC

      Also, Draco being perhaps a Nephew, and that the Narcissa Triplets though Youngest, they care greatly for their Middle Elder Sis Andy, and that they perhaps Hold Bella and their Parents responsible for everything, The Narcissa Triplets being Exceptionally Intelligent and Gifted, and That They Whisked Hermione away from the Battlefield, perhaps some Isolated and secluded Lagoon Island, where they could heal Hermione, and keep her Safe, while ensuring that Potter and the Order Wins, Though Not Taking part in the Battle, But using their Magics to ensure that Potter would complete his part, and of course having resentment to Ron, and wishing to Bed Hermione themselves, though can be rough, Hermione struggling, but perhaps as time went by, Surrendered to Her Feelings, and felt safe in their Stronger, Powerful hands

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    3. Cissy_s_Mione_24_2 on Chapter 1 Wed 08 Mar 2023 11:42AM UTC

      Perhaps that the Deep down, a Secret, Powerful Prophecy, Like the Potter Voldemort one, But that they being Soulmates, Black Triplets, Lost in Darkness, would be Enlightend and enamored, By a Muggle-Born, and that the Offspring would Rid the Family of Black of their Uncomings, something that would Rid them of their Unfocused beliefs

      Perhaps the Narcissa Triplets having their Last Names Black-Rosier

      The Narcissa Triplets names like Narcissa, Narwanda, Nartella or something like that

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    4. Cissy_s_Mione_24_2 on Chapter 1 Wed 08 Mar 2023 12:10PM UTC

      Also, Perhaps thought, The Narcissa Triplets having Green Skin and Black Nails, perhaps being Vampire-Like

      Hermione perhaps being almost Succubus-Like

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      1. Elemental_Mage on Chapter 1 Wed 08 Mar 2023 10:13PM UTC

        Elemental Mage

        Thank you for the suggestions, but to be honest, these are not things that would inspire me to write about and I’m not comfortable reading or writing about some of the things that you have mentioned.

        You could always try writing them yourself? Then you would get exactly the kind of story that you are looking for. Writing is a really rewarding process. Maybe think about it?

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