Comment on Wings of Fire - Court of Lies

1. StoriesFromALimbo on Chapter 23 Mon 25 Sep 2023 11:05PM UTC

   

   Thank you!

   Oh we're planning on letting a controlled dragon talk about how they felt when they were puppets under a spell and Whirlpool?
   Oh, we'll have a few trigger warning in the initial notes when his antagonist arc begins, he'll have his time to shine.

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2. 1. HeavenBreaker on Chapter 23 Mon 25 Sep 2023 11:07PM UTC

      

      thanks, i alwyas liked to imagine Whirlpool as an evil Starflight:
      knowladgeable, smart, but cowardly and easily frightend

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   2. 1. StoriesFromALimbo on Chapter 23 Tue 26 Sep 2023 12:29AM UTC

         

         Yes, when your villain has knowledge and is smart it can be a real threat.
         Plus, having the queen herself trust him with his daughters' education and being one of her favorite subjects gives him so much power, it was honestly a real pity that he didn't get more "screentime" to act.

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      2. 1. HeavenBreaker on Chapter 23 Tue 26 Sep 2023 03:00AM UTC

            

            if you wanna take it as a suggestion, i always imagine Whirlpool killing with poison, him attacking Tsunami in book 2 felt sudden, dumb and out of place
            i think he would be terrifying if he got a scene where he poisons someone and keeps casually monologuing

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