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  1. smigboat on Chapter 3 Tue 05 Dec 2023 07:33PM UTC

    Another chapter for me to sink my fangs into because I don't want to revise King Lear

    "Tubbo trailed behind them" - My poor boy. someone please hire this man

    "Martyn Littlewood." - HMMM. I WONDER WHO THIS COULD BE!!!

    "at the festival of Laura" - ...Is that a Carmilla reference?

    "The wool at the cuffs had begun to fray" - Get him some new clothes :(( The baba

    "mothers" - DOOMED YURI

    "They were… teeth- or rather fangs . Over fifty needle sharp vampire fangs hung from a rope in a mimicry of a necklace." - Ren I don't like you. that just seems so. MEAN. Ren don't be corrupt u loser.

    "boat ticket." - Ahh now, Tommy, everyone knows not to get on that night boat- oh. never mind, wrong universe

    "A clumsy drop of ink splattered onto the letter." - This is symbolic as to how he will not be the best hunter ever

    "He tried to convince himself something wasn’t up with Tubbo as they walked back in silence." - NOOOOO. pain. so sad :((

    "I got offers from all the uni courses I applied for which is kind of epic." - That is so epic I'm going to make them reject you :3

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    1. merabear on Chapter 3 Tue 05 Dec 2023 08:01PM UTC

      Another chapter for me to sink my fangs into because I don't want to revise King Lear - [NOOOOOOO. Also fangs hehe. Also same, writing the next chapter > studying]

      My poor boy. someone please hire this man - [he is so salty about everything, they have to hire him before he joins the vampires]

      HMMM. I WONDER WHO THIS COULD BE!!! - [it's like real subtle... you'll never guess]

      ...Is that a Carmilla reference? - [take a guess]

      Get him some new clothes :(( The baba - [he loves his little comfy jumper. it's a bit old but so is phil]

      DOOMED YURI - [hehe]

      Ren I don't like you. that just seems so. MEAN. Ren don't be corrupt u loser. - [ayo don't blame me, this was all your influence]

      Ahh now, Tommy, everyone knows not to get on that night boat- oh. never mind, wrong universe - [don't worry, he took the afternoon boat. not letting that happen again... unless...]

      This is symbolic as to how he will not be the best hunter ever - ['tis not his fault]

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      1. smigboat on Chapter 3 Tue 05 Dec 2023 08:40PM UTC

        [Also same, writing the next chapter > studying] I would rather die than study. I dont wanna sit an exam tomorrow. RAHH

        [he is so salty about everything, they have to hire him before he joins the vampires] He just wants to be like all the others 3

        [he loves his little comfy jumper. it's a bit old but so is phil] He is married to a woman, and that is interesting

        [ayo don't blame me, this was all your influence] pulling people's fangs out :(( I stg if Tub ends up with Tommy's around his neck

        [don't worry, he took the afternoon boat. not letting that happen again... unless...] Is that a duck quacking I hear?

        ['tis not his fault] He is but a little lad

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        1. merabear on Chapter 3 Tue 05 Dec 2023 10:01PM UTC

          I would rather die than study. I dont wanna sit an exam tomorrow. RAHH - [imagine having a test tomorrow LLLLLL]

          pulling people's fangs out :(( I stg if Tub ends up with Tommy's around his neck - [well I wasn't going to before but if there's so much demand for it, I suppose I must]

          Is that a duck quacking I hear? - can't wait for a few chapters time hehe

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          1. smigboat on Chapter 3 Tue 05 Dec 2023 10:20PM UTC

            [imagine having a test tomorrow LLLLLL] SHUT UPPPPPPPPPPPP. RAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. imagine having two tests today.... ooohhh... embarrassing...

            [well I wasn't going to before but if there's so much demand for it, I suppose I must] How dare you. i only create pain wherever i go

            [an't wait for a few chapters time hehe] I want some duck action

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            1. merabear on Chapter 3 Tue 05 Dec 2023 10:30PM UTC

              SHUT UPPPPPPPPPPPP. RAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. imagine having two tests today.... ooohhh... embarrassing... - [art barely counted as an exam]

              How dare you. i only create pain wherever i go - [well i was about to definitely have a very non angsty story but oh well]

              I want some duck action - [the story will only be cute and fluffy from now on <- a liar]

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              1. smigboat on Chapter 3 Tue 05 Dec 2023 11:17PM UTC

                [art barely counted as an exam] dooooooonnnn'ttttttt care.

                [well i was about to definitely have a very non angsty story but oh well] I definitely totally ruined it with my angst

                [the story will only be cute and fluffy from now on <- a liar] Good i hate angst <- A liar

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                1. merabear on Chapter 3 Tue 05 Dec 2023 11:19PM UTC

                  Yeah it was deffo you that made it angsty... i would never do that by myself...

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                  1. smigboat on Chapter 3 Tue 05 Dec 2023 11:22PM UTC

                    Sure... totally...

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                    1. merabear on Chapter 3 Tue 05 Dec 2023 11:48PM UTC

                      my over 400 word planning... uhm fluff... yeah... totally...

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