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  1. Moon_Heart_Perfect on Chapter 2 Sun 15 Sep 2024 06:54AM UTC

    Omg these ideas are amazing 🤩 I'll input them tomorrow

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    1. Aureia on Chapter 2 Sun 15 Sep 2024 09:39PM UTC

      I'm looking forward to it :-) Thank you.

      Oh and as Zuko recovers, the gAang has to help Zuko build up self confidence and learn to feel safe again-quite the task considering the fact that Zuko is gonna expect them to treat him like shit, think he deserves to be treated like shit and be confused and even more unsettled when he realizes they don't treat him like shit. I mean, his whole belief system is gonna be upended, poor guy. He's probably also gonna be skittish and afraid to do stuff because he doesn't "want to be punished again, I'm sorry, I know I deserve it because I'm bad" and mistakes are probably going to be a minefield for a while too. Basically, the gAang has to deal with Zuko being scared of them and expecting horrible treatment.

      And, one other thing I'd really love to see: Zuko's flames being stronger and evolving as the true, healthy form of firebending as well as his improving mental health unlock his true potential (because I think having to bend with all that negativity and hatred as well as all the abuse stifled Zuko's true potential; and that Ozai knew Zuko was powerful and too pure hearted for his tastes, so he set out to destroy him). I honestly believe Zuko has the potential to outclass both his sister and Ozai with his bending, even if it may take some time.

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      1. Moon_Heart_Perfect on Chapter 2 Wed 18 Sep 2024 03:50AM UTC

        Thank you, you have such good ideas 💙!!!! I'm sorry I haven't updated it in a while, I've been busy with school 🏫

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        1. Aureia on Chapter 2 Wed 18 Sep 2024 08:32PM UTC

          You're welcome and thank you ;-)

          No need to feel bad, real life should always take priority.

          Last Edited Wed 18 Sep 2024 08:32PM UTC

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          1. Moon_Heart_Perfect on Chapter 2 Thu 19 Sep 2024 02:25AM UTC

            Thanks, still, I love where this story is going and I AM sorry for slow updates.

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            1. Aureia on Chapter 2 Thu 19 Sep 2024 07:00AM UTC

              You're welcome. I understand and I forgive you. (Though I really do not think you need to apologize).

              I also love where this story is going.

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              1. Moon_Heart_Perfect on Chapter 2 Fri 20 Sep 2024 03:24AM UTC

                I'll probably work more on it this weekend.

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                1. Aureia on Chapter 2 Fri 20 Sep 2024 11:57AM UTC

                  Don't stress yourself. When the update comes, it comes. I'm willing to wait if that means you had fun writing it ;-)

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                  1. Moon_Heart_Perfect on Chapter 2 Sun 22 Sep 2024 02:28AM UTC

                    Omg thanks, I'll write soon, I promise I won't abandon it.

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                    1. Aureia on Chapter 2 Sun 22 Sep 2024 07:09AM UTC

                      🥰🥰🥰

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                      1. Moon_Heart_Perfect on Chapter 2 Sun 22 Sep 2024 08:19PM UTC

                        💙💙💙🩵💎

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