Comment on You’re So Pretty! (Derogatory)

  1. Songrbird on Chapter 2 Wed 16 Apr 2025 09:08AM UTC

    ‘’Anna isn’t quite mean currently‘’, yeah, no, she is already making me grumble under my breath. She’s intentionally throwing this girl to the wolves, on the happenstance of something that went on possibly years ago at a sorority, if I’ve got that right. Girl, you’re calling Tanya obnoxious? Like your any better. 😤

    Also, I like Edge’s characterization in this. It’s kind of refreshing not having him scream insults or be so obviously distasteful of the mc in the first introductions. The behavior he often exudes in the beginnings of fanfics—especially when the mc has yet to formally move in—would deter anyone with a hindbrain and self-preservation. So, seeing him be more subtle in a sense and give off the impression of just being a tsundere, paints this as more of a natural interaction that leaves me as a reader anticipating because I know what’s coming.

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    1. Anonymous Creator on Chapter 2 Wed 16 Apr 2025 10:52PM UTC

      Tanya doesn’t know what’s coming for her 😭😭

      And thank you!! Yeah, I don’t want their distaste to be too obvious yet. Just Tanya being like, “did I imagine that???”

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