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  1. teacosy Thu 04 Sep 2025 04:42PM UTC

    i think i seriously ascended to the highest plane seeing your beautiful work and wyn's beautiful art. i seriously don't even know what to say other than my good heavens ... i want this projected onto my headstone. im going to have this tattooed over my eyelids alongside the art because wow. what a team of dreams and magical storytelling and momo's process of trying so desperately to get the people she loves to listen.
    the people she adores forgetting her and dear momo her triumphs her rise with the dandelion. it feels masterfully done and there's something to be said about making a wish and true loves kiss and overcoming in a lot of ways to say how you really feel. that there is a voice and you should present it, embarrassment BE DAMNED. that girl CAN GIVE A CONFESSION!!!!!!!
    i cant im dead theres so many passages i loved and i think what destroyed me was seiko making the plate of two and then realizing she didnt need to do that but its so inherent to her because its always been just her and momo.
    and okaruns transformed state allowing him to see her but obviously he cant because the effects it has on his body ..... i love consequence and the way you handled it in this. it's just amazing work really and truly. the most incredible dynamic and exploration of tiny momo and her connections. this is everything. this is ... WOW. aahhhh.

    ----Dread drops like a stone into the still waters of Momo’s soul, and she starts yelling at her Granny to please look at her, see her, remember her. Momo yells until her tiny voice goes raw. The tears she doesn’t let fall are nothing to the silence that does. Seiko doesn't so much as look in her direction.
    ----

    im ruined... im in shambles...

    ---Feeling childish, she decides to pluck a dandelion and make a wish. Pulling it from the ground is difficult, but not impossible. The stalk is taller than she is. It’s the perfect dandelion, with a spherical puff of seeds catching the evening rays of the sun. She remembers plucking them with ease as a child with Jiji, the two of them holding dandelions and running through fields to spread the seeds.---

    ahh ... im so charmed this is excellent work between the two of you. wyn's art pairs beautifully with your storytelling. amazing. im dead.

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    1. areopagitica Thu 04 Sep 2025 05:22PM UTC

      teacosy with the long comment to strike me down once more!! I welcome thee

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