wow... this fic has been so wonderful, where do i even begin? 🥺🥺🥺
i really love the premise of this fic. the question of, "where does shinjiro go from here?" is an incredibly compelling storyline starter. and the way you go about answering this question, and depict how he navigates life five months after the coma... it's very splendid...!!! the spoken dialogue between the characters, and shinjiro's monologue, all feel very believable- both in terms of the characterization and how they react to the situation. i really love how you depict shinjiro reconciling with his chance for a normal life and what that means for him after spending so much of his life resigned to thinking he didn't have a future 😭
some other things i wanted to highlight...!!!
i'm especially fond of the second chapter with the interactions between fuuka, aigis, junpei, ken, and yukari. i feel like the dialogue exchange captures grief very well... from the things people wish have happened, to how everyone copes with it differently. the way you depict ken is so awesome. i feel that you nail his voice very well (this can be said about the other characters in p3!). i really love how you wrote his conversation with shinjiro. it really captures how ken matured since that time,,,
and this most recent chapter!!! the way the dynamic between kotone and shinjiro is effectively reversed because she's now the one resting in the hospital... i really really like how you touch upon that in shinjiro's thoughts. the way he fondly recalls kotone's tendencies and imagines how she'd react in the situation, not to mention how the surroundings remind him of her... its so very sweet...!!! your fic.... it invented love.... methinks... 🥺🥺🥺 !!! this chapter conveys love and fondness , and promise for the future, soo soo nicely. it makes me weep (affectionate. very positive).
each chapter you've written has satisfyingly built upon each other and ohh.. the end quotes/remarks are so good. excellent page turners methinks. i love how concise and rewarding the chapters are, they're so vivid and immersive...!!! and to think that there's still more you want to write... 🥺 i can't wait to see what other emotions and scenarios you'd like to explore in the future.. the highs and lows,,, i'm sure it will be a blast!!! especially if/when kotone is up and running for their third year... i am excited to see how they talk to each other and catch up on things...
thank you so much for writing this and taking the time to share it! it's an absolute joy to see shinjiro through your lens, and i hope my comment could adequately express tha!! best wishes with all your creative pursuits, i'm eager to see where this goes :3 !!! yippee!!!!!
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crescentfool on Chapter 3 Fri 26 Sep 2025 03:45AM UTC
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