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Summary:

An accident at the valley of Whispers made our builder almost blind. She can only see blurry silhouettes on the light.
Since, she feels fragile, and she feels useless, struggling to keep her job as a builder and only keeping it thanks to an arrangement with Mi-an and Rocky.
But the worst thing about being blind, is to have been unable to see the face of the old mill mysterious stranger, that day.

Notes:

Hi there ! This is my first story ever written and posted on AO3. All returns and comments will highly be appreciated, so please take time to leave a little comment at the end of your reading to share with me your experience of lecture! <3.

Since chapter 23, BV is beta-ed, by no less than 4 (awesome) persons ! Infinite thanks to Zyikic, Ebimaki, Kitana Coldfire and Tindomiselde. For real you're my absolute lovely badass squad and I'll never thank you enough for your help. <3
Special thanks to Katayu and Raccoonfangirlfor their strong and amazing helps with a lot of chapters. 🤍
An immense thank you to MinionLady too, who helps me come back to previous chapter and post-beta-ing the fic!

This fic is starting to become a group project and I love it 😊

EDIT : After almost one year, I can say that I love our interactions in the comment section, it thrill me and give wings to my pen to write! (and also made me dying of laugh, frfr.)

Please note that English is not my first language, but I have tried my best to use the most accurate style possible. Thanks to your so incredible positive feedback, I'm feeling more confident now!
Please forgive me by advance if some sentences sounds a little clumsy some times. I'll correct them immediately based on your comments!

Chapter 1: Prologue

Notes:

Disclaimer : Please note that the main character's name (builder) is ELISE and it's not the same as Elsie. Sorry for the confusion it can creates!

Chapter Text

Before beginning the story, you need to know ...

This story begins before the «Battle of Sandrock» mission, just before the «clear the air» main mission, and the first main quests about constructing the bridge and the tunnel to Portia ( «A bridge too far» and «This is not a drill »).

This version of the builder has never yet met Logan in person, nor talked to him. They just share "that look" at the explosion of the water tower (you know which look i'm talking about eh).

The kidnapping of Matilda happened, but the builder did not participate in her rescue. She does not hunt down Logan with Bronco the kid and the civil corps and do not find their hideout.

This is an alternative universe where Grace, Logan and Haru will not recruit the builder in their band to investigate on the water traffic in the «Buried Secrets» mission. You'll get to understand why. 

Last thing, general distances, for additional realism, have been significantly increased to substantially lengthen travel times between points of interest.  This allows for very long walks/gallops along the southern ravines of Sandrock without reaching the end in less than thirty seconds!

--- Prologue ---

 

The downside of wearing a protective suit was the inability to wipe away the dripping sweat from one's forehead. And she was sweating a lot . But she needed those aluminum scraps, so she did her best to endure the unbearable heat she was trapped in, in order to keep on salvaging the materials. The midday sun beat down hard on the Valley of Whispers.

Another major flaw of the suit was how it altered certain senses, notably hearing. Likely this was why she didn’t hear the pack of masked fiends behind her until it was too late. By the time she noticed them, they were already lighting a bomb to throw at her. But sparks— combined with toxic gas—was a terrible combination and definitely not the best thing to do. Before they could do anything more, a massive explosion erupted, throwing her violently backwards into darkness.

When she woke, at first she thought night had fallen, due to the blackness before her eyes. She groped for her weapon, but could not find it. Anxiety ran through her veins. How much time had passed while she was at the mercy of the nearby monsters? Her breathing was hard and harsh in her ears, and she realized with a start that her suit had lost its impermeability. She was breathing toxic gas. 

Panic swiftly succeeded anxiety. She still saw nothing, but the acid was rapidly filling her lungs. She needed to move, and quickly.  Her horse had certainly fled with the explosion, but she still whistled desperately. After what felt like an eternity, she heard the muffled sound of hooves on the sand.

“Dybet!” she whispered, relieved. The tip of her horse's nostrils gently touched the top of her suit. She rose to her feet slowly, steadying herself against her mount. It was a struggle to get into the saddle, but she succeeded thanks to the adrenaline that only a deep survival instinct could summon.

"Take me home," she implored her horse.

Regardless of if her mare understood her command, she still set off. Elise could only allow herself to be transported. At some point she fell unconscious again, but when she woke she was still in the saddle, weakly lying across Dybet's neck.

"Builder!" 

She heard the cry but couldn't reply. Several hands lifted her from the saddle, and she felt her suit being removed. Panicked screams echoed in her ears.

"Go fetch Dr. Fang! NOW!" 

She passed out.