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Chapter 23: What the Heart Remembers

Summary:

The first thing Chloe learned about being human again was this: Her body remembered things her mind didn’t.

She woke before sunrise with her heart racing, lungs tight, fingers curling instinctively toward empty space—until she realized Mark was asleep on the couch across the room, close enough that the ache beneath her ribs eased the moment she focused on him.

Not magic.
Not the Thread.

Memory.

Notes:

Song you could listen to while reading or rereading chapters 23 to 25:
“Chasing Cars" — Tommee Profitt & Fleurie

(See the end of the chapter for more notes.)

Chapter Text

Chapter Twenty-Three: What the Heart Remembers

 

The first thing Chloe learned about being human again was this:

Her body remembered things her mind didn’t.

She woke before sunrise with her heart racing, lungs tight, fingers curling instinctively toward empty space—until she realized Mark was asleep on the couch across the room, close enough that the ache beneath her ribs eased the moment she focused on him.

Not magic.
Not the Thread.

Memory.

She lay still, staring at the ceiling of the GDA safehouse bedroom, listening to the steady rhythm of Mark’s breathing through the thin wall. Every inhale he took felt like permission for her own chest to rise.

When he shifted, the echo inside her responded—
a faint warmth spreading under her sternum.

She pressed a hand there, startled.

“…So that’s what you left me,” she murmured.


Learning the Echo

By noon, Eve had turned the common room into an improvised testing space.

“No pressure,” Eve said gently, adjusting the scanners. “We’re not looking for power spikes. Just… reactions.”

Chloe stood near the center of the room, hands clasped, feeling conspicuously small without light spilling from her skin. Mark hovered at the edge of the marked circle, arms folded, eyes never leaving her.

“Okay,” Eve said. “Mark—take three steps back.”

He did.

The echo flared.

Chloe’s knees buckled slightly as a sharp, hollow pressure bloomed in her chest—like the moment before a sob.

“I feel—” She sucked in a breath. “I feel wrong.”

Mark stopped instantly. “That’s enough.”

Eve held up a hand. “One more step, Mark. Slowly.”

He hesitated, jaw tight, then did as asked.

Chloe gasped.

Not pain.
Something colder.

Like her body couldn’t remember how to stand alone.

“That’s it,” Mark snapped, crossing the distance in two strides and catching her before she fell.

The pressure vanished the second his arms wrapped around her.

Her breathing evened.
Her heartbeat slowed.

Eve stared at the readings, disturbed.

“…Your nervous system is keying off him,” she said quietly. “Like a missing limb that still knows it should be there.”

Chloe clutched Mark’s shirt, embarrassed by how much she needed him just to feel okay.

“So what,” Mark said tightly, “she’s tethered to me forever?”

Eve didn’t answer right away.

“…Not tethered,” she said at last. “Anchored.”

Chloe closed her eyes.

Anchors were meant to hold things in place.


What Mark Carries

That night, Mark couldn’t sleep.

He sat on the edge of the bed, staring down at his chest where the faint golden ember still curled around his heart on the scans.

It pulsed sometimes. Not painfully. Just… there.

A reminder.

He hadn’t told Chloe yet—but when he concentrated, when he really focused—

He could feel her.

Not where she was.
But how she was.

When her breath stuttered, his chest tightened.
When her fear spiked, something warm and defensive coiled beneath his ribs.

And when she laughed—softly, quietly, trying not to draw attention to herself—

The ember flared.

He rubbed a hand over his face.

“What did you do to me, Chloe,” he muttered—not angry. Not afraid.

Just awed.

Behind him, the mattress shifted.

Chloe sat up slowly, hair falling loose around her shoulders.

“You’re doing it again,” she said.

Mark turned. “Doing what?”

“Hurting,” she replied gently.

He stilled.

“…You can tell?”

She nodded. “I can’t feel you like before. But when the echo reacts… it’s usually because you’re spiraling.”

He exhaled slowly.

“You gave up everything,” he said quietly. “And now I’m the reason you can’t even walk across a room alone.”

She slid closer, carefully, until their knees touched.

“That’s not true,” she said. “I can walk alone.”

“Not for long.”

She reached out, resting her palm over his heart.

The echo surged—warm, steady, grounding.

Her shoulders relaxed instantly.

“So can I,” she whispered.

Mark swallowed hard.

“You shouldn’t have had to choose,” he said. “Between power and—”

“I didn’t,” she interrupted softly. “I chose love.

His throat tightened.

“And love,” she continued, “doesn’t disappear just because the universe says it should.”

They sat there in silence, foreheads nearly touching, breathing each other in.

Neither of them noticed the security lights flicker.


The Hunter Arrives

Cecil noticed.

The moment the GDA’s orbital sensors screamed, he was already moving.

“Lock down the base,” he barked. “Full alert—this isn’t a drill.”

In orbit above Earth, space bent inward like a wound reopening.

The Hunter emerged without spectacle.

No explosions.
No fanfare.

Just gravity collapsing around a singular, hateful purpose.

Its gaze pierced the atmosphere, locking onto one thing—

The ember inside Mark Grayson.

“FOUND YOU,” it whispered, voice rippling across the vacuum.


Instinct

Chloe felt it before the alarms sounded.

A deep, instinctive dread clawed up her spine.

She grabbed Mark’s wrist.

He sucked in a sharp breath at the same time.

“Something’s wrong,” they said together.

The echo flared violently.

Then the alarms blared.

Cecil’s voice thundered over the intercom:

“MARK. CHLOE. DO NOT MOVE.”

Too late.

The walls shook.

The sky outside the reinforced windows darkened as something massive eclipsed the sun.

Chloe’s heart pounded.

“It’s here,” she whispered. “The Hunter.”

Mark stepped in front of her without thinking.

His body moved on instinct—Viltrumite reflex, ancient and absolute.

“I won’t let it touch you,” he said.

Chloe’s hands clenched in his shirt.

“Mark,” she said urgently. “It doesn’t want me anymore.”

He froze.

“…What?”

Her voice trembled, but her eyes were steady.

“It wants what’s left of the Thread,” she said. “It wants you.

The echo roared between them.

Outside, reality cracked.

The Hunter descended.

And for the first time since losing her powers—

Chloe realized something terrifying.

She couldn’t fight this.

But she could still choose.

Notes:

Next Chapter Preview:

The Hunter breaches the GDA base, bypassing every defense to reach Mark. As the Guardians engage, Chloe is forced to confront a devastating truth: the echo anchoring her to life is also painting a target on Mark’s heart.

Faced with the possibility that staying close to him may kill him, Chloe considers the unthinkable—letting him go.

But Mark has never been good at letting her sacrifice herself alone.